DESCRIPTIVE WRITING
homework tasks
Task 1
The story version:
I was running down a straight grey pavement when I came to a dead end. I don't think that my four legs can handle the gravity of this situation anymore. Everything goes downhill from here, literally. These bumps look pretty hard. They are covered with a layer of dust and are imprinted with marks. I've seen these dirty printed marks on other pavements before and I think that they are made by the giants stomping every where. These giants stomp everywhere and ruin everything. I must hurry but I'm scared because I've never encountered a place like this before. If i look to my right, I see nothing but grass and to my left, I see the same. Far off, I see another pavement, it's similar to the pavement I'm standing on but first I must cross the wrath of the lumpy area. My scale may protect me from the craters formed on these lumps so I'm going to dash through this area hoping to make it. My tail however, may be a problem. I don't quite understand these rods sticking out of the pavement, perhaps they are a killing machine. So wish me luck as I gather courage to go down this frightening, crater covered, dirty pavement.
The descriptive version:
The flat grey pavement came to a dead end. The gravity of the situation increased and cannot be handled by my four legs. Everything goes downhill from here, literally. The bumps on this unusual surface look rough. Covered with layer of dust and imprinted with marks, the bumps block my way. The marks are everywhere. The moving giants cause these marks everywhere and ruin everything. The marks sometimes even stink worse than a dog's waste and sometimes, it is a dog's waste. To the left, there is freshly cut green grass and to the right, the scenery is the same. The grass gives off a soothing, calming scent. Far off, there is another pavement which looks the same as the one before, flat, grey and smooth to crawl on. These lumps give off bad vibes and it looks as though anybody could topple of them and kill themselves. perhaps dashing through this area will solve this problem. The newly painted white rods sticking out of these lumps are strange and look out of place and don't make sense to me.
I was running down a straight grey pavement when I came to a dead end. I don't think that my four legs can handle the gravity of this situation anymore. Everything goes downhill from here, literally. These bumps look pretty hard. They are covered with a layer of dust and are imprinted with marks. I've seen these dirty printed marks on other pavements before and I think that they are made by the giants stomping every where. These giants stomp everywhere and ruin everything. I must hurry but I'm scared because I've never encountered a place like this before. If i look to my right, I see nothing but grass and to my left, I see the same. Far off, I see another pavement, it's similar to the pavement I'm standing on but first I must cross the wrath of the lumpy area. My scale may protect me from the craters formed on these lumps so I'm going to dash through this area hoping to make it. My tail however, may be a problem. I don't quite understand these rods sticking out of the pavement, perhaps they are a killing machine. So wish me luck as I gather courage to go down this frightening, crater covered, dirty pavement.
The descriptive version:
The flat grey pavement came to a dead end. The gravity of the situation increased and cannot be handled by my four legs. Everything goes downhill from here, literally. The bumps on this unusual surface look rough. Covered with layer of dust and imprinted with marks, the bumps block my way. The marks are everywhere. The moving giants cause these marks everywhere and ruin everything. The marks sometimes even stink worse than a dog's waste and sometimes, it is a dog's waste. To the left, there is freshly cut green grass and to the right, the scenery is the same. The grass gives off a soothing, calming scent. Far off, there is another pavement which looks the same as the one before, flat, grey and smooth to crawl on. These lumps give off bad vibes and it looks as though anybody could topple of them and kill themselves. perhaps dashing through this area will solve this problem. The newly painted white rods sticking out of these lumps are strange and look out of place and don't make sense to me.
Task 2
Four white walls placed perfectly perpendicular to each other as a sweet scent fills the air. The scent smells kind of like mango juice and it is emitted from the newly glued blue and wooly carpet placed above the floor. The atmosphere is cold and chilly but the warm laughs and chatter that fill the room takes the cold away and replaces with a fuzzy, warm feeling that we get at home after taking a nice warm shower and finally sitting down after a long day of work. The tables and chair that had the same grey colour are lined in a square without one side with a rectangle in the middle of the room. This arrangement unites the people that fill the room and create chatter among them. There is a wall with a white board and opposing that wall is a wall with posters. There are very little objects and the room is large. The class has a special white table in the corner with a computer and it is utilised by higher authority to teach.
Task 3
Her noodle like straight hair flows freely in a ponytail. Her hair is as golden as an oscar award given to actors and actresses. Her pale white skin reminds me of a vampire as though all the blood has been drained out from it's body. Her laugh is very clumsy, almost as clumsy as goofy from a cartoon show but it brightens up my day anyway. Her eyes, the shade of a durian and they change just like those of a cat. Her black pupil enlarges in the dark. Her personality resembles that one a kind old grand mom caring for her children and grandchildren and making sure that everyone is happy. Her humbleness, responsibleness and caring heart makes her who she is today.
Task 4
The distinctive scent of salt filled the air as the steady sound of a motor boat making it's way down the ocean broke the silence. The reflection of the sun on the ocean showed off the many tints of blue the ocean consisted off. The blue in the ocean mixed as well as the Vincent Van Gough painting "Starry Night". White Puffy clouds filled the clear blue sky. The clouds were sheep only, they didn't have a head or legs and these sheep could been seen at the horizon as well. It was the perfect day, clear, sunny, not too hot and tempting. Enjoying this beautiful day sat a tree. The tree was slanting down as though it was told to do a yoga exercise to exercise it's upper thigh muscles. It's roots shooting out the grown as though trying to pull the tree back into position like a bunch of fingers in a horror movie shooting up the floor trying to drag somebody with it. The trunk consisting a a dark brown colour appearing light because of the shining sun and the trunk consists of several snakes trying to make their way up to tree to the leaves. Above the trunk, rested the leaves of dark and light green tinted with yellow. The top appearing light because of the sun and the bottom appearing dark due to the lack of sun. The sunlit tree casted a vague shadow on the fine white salt like sand only it wasn't as white as salt. What a calm beautiful day it was for the tree.